{"id":"create-song-lyric-feedback","audience":"high-school","category":"creative-writing","technique":"constraints","track":"writing","title":"Get feedback on your song lyrics that names the line","free":false,"task":"You wrote lyrics for a song you'll play at the school talent show, and you want feedback, not new lyrics. Get exactly 3 numbered notes, each starting with the one line it's about, like \"Line 6:\", each under 30 words, under 130 words in total, plain text. Suggest no replacement lyrics. Your bandmate thinks the chorus breaks its own rhyme in one spot, so check that.","materialLabel":"Your lyrics (attached to your prompt automatically)","material":"MY SONG: \"Porch Light\" (for the Fairview High talent show, March 8)\n\nVerse 1\n1 The porch light's on but nobody's home\n2 I'm counting cracks along the road\n3 You said you'd call when the summer's done\n4 But summer's gone and the phone's like stone\n\nChorus\n5 Leave the porch light on for me\n6 I'll find my way back eventually\n7 Leave the porch light on tonight\n8 Even if I'm wrong\n\nVerse 2\n9 The porch light's on but nobody's home\n10 The swing set creaks the way it did\n11 I wrote your name on the window frost\n12 And watched it melt like it was nothing\n\nMe: guitar + vocals, my friend Theo plays drums. 3 minutes max.\nI'm proud of verse 2 line 11.","rules":[{"type":"numberedItems","count":3},{"type":"maxWords","max":130},{"type":"plainText"}],"mistakes":[{"title":"Getting rewritten lyrics","why":"The AI 'helps' by writing new lines, and then the song isn't yours on stage.","fix":"Add: \"Don't suggest replacement lyrics or rhyme words.\"","checks":["r2"]},{"title":"Vague notes","why":"The AI says 'the chorus could be stronger' without pointing to a line.","fix":"Add: \"Start each note with the line number, like Line 6:.\"","checks":["r0"]},{"title":"Not asking about the rhyme","why":"The AI comments on mood and imagery and may miss the broken rhyme.","fix":"Add: \"Check whether the chorus keeps its rhyme.\"","checks":["r1"]},{"title":"Getting a long review","why":"AI feedback comes as headed sections with praise for every verse.","fix":"Be exact: \"Exactly 3 numbered notes, each under 25 words.\"","checks":["numberedItems","maxWords"]},{"title":"Forgetting where it's going","why":"AI adds bold and headings that show up as stray symbols in your lyric notebook.","fix":"Add: \"Plain text, no bold, no headings.\"","checks":["plainText"]}],"promptHints":[{"label":"Says no new lyrics","patterns":["(don't|do not|no|never).{0,20}(rewrite|replace|new (line|lyric)|suggest)"]},{"label":"Asks for line numbers","patterns":["line \\d","line number","which line"]},{"label":"Checks the rhyme","patterns":["rhyme","chorus"]},{"label":"Says how many notes","patterns":["\\b(3|three)\\b.{0,25}(note|point|fix)","exactly \\d+","numbered"]},{"label":"Sets a length limit","patterns":["\\d+\\s*words","word (limit|count)","under \\d+"]}],"hint":"Song feedback is only useful if it points at a line and leaves the writing to you. Ask for line numbers, the rhyme check, and no new lyrics.","rubricLabels":["Each note starts with 'Line' and a line number (like 'Line 8:')","One note says line 8 ('Even if I'm wrong') breaks the chorus rhyme with line 7 ('tonight')","Gives no replacement lyrics, new lines or rhyme words for the student to use (quoting the student's lines is fine)"]}