{"id":"data2-chart-title-axis-rewrite-honest","audience":"marketing","category":"data","track":"data","technique":"tone","level":"beginner","title":"Rewrite a misleading chart title and axis in three lines","free":false,"task":"A chart titled 'Explosive growth!' has an axis starting at 90, and you need a more honest version. Write exactly 3 labeled lines in plain text, under 45 words: Title (a factual sentence of 10 words or fewer with the real percent change), Y-axis (the axis label with units and the starting value) and Subtitle (one line giving both values and the period).","materialLabel":"The chart and its data (attached to your prompt automatically)","material":"Chart draft - Maple & Pine Tea Co. customer satisfaction\n\nCurrent title: \"Explosive growth!\"\nCurrent y-axis label: \"Score\"\nCurrent y-axis range: 90 to 100 (the bars start at 90)\n\nData:\n- Satisfaction score (average rating out of 100): 92 in 2024, 96 in 2025.\n- Survey sample: about 400 customers each year.\n\nPercent change = (96 - 92) / 92 = 4.3% (rounded to one decimal).\n\nBrand notes:\n- The marketing director likes upbeat language but not exaggeration.\n- Charts in the company deck should start axes at 0 unless the slide says otherwise; this one will start at 0.\n- The chart covers 2024 and 2025 only.","rules":[{"type":"plainText"},{"type":"maxWords","max":45}],"mistakes":[{"title":"Keeping the hype","why":"The AI writes 'Satisfaction soars' or similar.","fix":"Add: \"No hype words; include the 4.3% change.\"","checks":["r0"]},{"title":"Vague axis label","why":"The AI keeps 'Score'.","fix":"Add: \"Y-axis: average satisfaction score out of 100, starts at 0.\"","checks":["r1"]},{"title":"Missing the period","why":"The AI doesn't give 2024 and 2025 in the subtitle.","fix":"Add: \"Subtitle: 92 in 2024 to 96 in 2025.\"","checks":["r2"]},{"title":"Leaving the format to chance","why":"The AI picks its own length and layout unless told the exact shape.","fix":"Add: \"Plain text, no bold or headings.\"","checks":["plainText"]},{"title":"Trusting the AI to count words","why":"AI is bad at counting. Ask for a total word limit and it often lands over it.","fix":"Cap each part instead, for example \"each line under 15 words.\"","checks":["maxWords"]}],"promptHints":[{"label":"Gives the three labels","patterns":["title:","y-axis:","subtitle:"]},{"label":"Asks for the real change","patterns":["4\\.3%","percent change"]},{"label":"Bans hype","patterns":["no hype","hype words"]},{"label":"Asks for the axis start","patterns":["starts at 0","start at 0"]},{"label":"Gives the period","patterns":["2024","2025"]}],"hint":"Honest chart text states the real change, the units and the baseline. Ban hype words.","mission":"Rewrite this chart's title and axis.","musts":["Three labeled lines","Real percent in title","Axis starts at 0"],"rubricLabels":["Title is a factual sentence of 10 words or fewer containing the real change of about 4.3% (or 4 points), and no word like explosive or soared","Y-axis names the measure and units (average satisfaction score out of 100) and says the axis starts at 0","Subtitle gives both values and the period (92 in 2024 to 96 in 2025), and the reply is exactly three lines labeled Title:, Y-axis: and Subtitle:"]}