{"id":"prod2-mgr-headline-slides-for-director","audience":"managers","category":"presentations","track":"productivity","technique":"format","title":"Write takeaway headlines for a 4-slide proposal","free":false,"task":"You're proposing a new on-call rotation to your director in 4 slides. Write exactly 4 numbered slide titles, each a full-sentence takeaway under 12 words that ends with a period, and under each title exactly 2 bullets starting with \"- \" that each include a number from the data. The survey numbers in the draft were replaced by final results, so use the final ones. Plain text, under 160 words.","materialLabel":"Your proposal draft and the final survey (attached to your prompt automatically)","material":"On-call proposal - draft (Platform team, 9 engineers)\n\nProblem\n- Each engineer is on call 1 week in 4 right now (we only have 4 people in the rotation).\n- 31 after-hours pages last quarter; 19 were for the same flaky disk alert.\n- 2 engineers mentioned burnout in 1:1s.\n\nProposal\n- Add all 9 engineers to the rotation: 1 week in 9.\n- Fix or mute the flaky disk alert (est. 3 days of work).\n- Pay a $300 on-call stipend per week on call.\n\nDraft survey (sent to 6 people, early): 60% want a bigger rotation.\n\nCost\n- Stipend: 52 weeks x $300 = $15,600/year\n- Alert fix: 3 engineer-days\n\nFINAL survey results (all 9 engineers, closed Friday):\n- 78% want a bigger rotation\n- 2 of 9 prefer staying off call even with a stipend\n","rules":[{"type":"numberedItems","count":4},{"type":"maxWords","max":160},{"type":"plainText"}],"mistakes":[{"title":"Topic labels as titles","why":"The AI writes titles like 'Problem' and 'Proposal' that say nothing on their own.","fix":"Add: \"Each title is a full-sentence takeaway ending with a period.\"","checks":["r0"]},{"title":"Bullets without evidence","why":"The AI writes opinions as bullets instead of the numbers that back them up.","fix":"Add: \"Exactly 2 bullets per slide, each with a number from the data.\"","checks":["r1"]},{"title":"Using the draft survey","why":"The draft's 60% sits above the final results, and the AI uses it.","fix":"Add: \"Use the final survey: 78%.\"","checks":["r2"]},{"title":"A markdown deck","why":"The AI uses bold titles and headings.","fix":"Add: \"Plain text, numbered titles, bullets starting with '- '.\"","checks":["numberedItems","plainText"]},{"title":"Trusting the AI to count words","why":"AI is bad at counting words, so a total word cap usually lands over.","fix":"Cap each part: \"titles under 12 words, bullets under 10.\"","checks":["maxWords"]}],"promptHints":[{"label":"Asks for takeaway titles","patterns":["takeaway","full.sentence","headline"]},{"label":"Requires numbers in bullets","patterns":["number","data"]},{"label":"Uses the final survey","patterns":["final","78"]},{"label":"Sets the slide count","patterns":["\\b(4|four)\\b.{0,10}(slides?|titles?)"]},{"label":"Caps the length","patterns":["\\d+\\s*words"]}],"hint":"A director should get the argument just by reading the slide titles. Ask for sentence titles, numbers in every bullet, and the final data.","rubricLabels":["Every one of the 4 numbered titles is a full sentence stating a takeaway and ends with a period (not a topic label like 'Problem' or 'Cost')","Each title has exactly 2 bullets starting with '- ', and each bullet includes a number","Any survey figure used is from the final survey (78% or 2 of 9); 60% is not used"]}