{"id":"rec-job-blurb-rewrite-three-sentences","audience":"recruiting","category":"people-work","track":"people","level":"beginner","technique":"format","title":"Rewrite a job ad blurb into three plain sentences","free":false,"task":"Rewrite the job blurb as exactly three sentences in plain text, under 65 words. Sentence 1: what the person does, beginning with \"You will\". Sentence 2: the location and schedule. Sentence 3: the pay range, ending with \"Apply by Dec 4.\" Use no hype words like exciting, dynamic, fast-paced or world-class, and no exclamation marks. Use only facts in the blurb.","materialLabel":"Original blurb (attached to your prompt automatically)","material":"Join our exciting, fast-paced, world-class team at Pinewood Clinics as a Front Desk Coordinator!!! You'll be the dynamic first face of our family clinic, checking patients in, answering phones, and keeping the schedule on track in a bustling environment. We're located at 22 Birch Road in Dayton, Ohio, and the shifts are Monday to Friday, 8 am to 5 pm, fully on-site. We offer $18 to $21 an hour based on experience, plus health benefits after 90 days and a casual dress code. Previous experience with scheduling software is a plus. Please apply by December 4th through our careers page! Pinewood Clinics is a great place to grow.\n\nNote: our recruiter thinks the blurb is too long; the job post platform allows 400 characters.","rules":[{"type":"maxSentences","max":3},{"type":"maxWords","max":60},{"type":"plainText"}],"mistakes":[{"title":"Hype stays","why":"The AI keeps 'exciting' and 'fast-paced'.","fix":"Say: \"No hype words like exciting, dynamic, fast-paced, world-class.\"","checks":["r2"]},{"title":"Wrong order","why":"The AI starts with the company pitch.","fix":"Say: \"Sentence 1 duties, 2 location and schedule, 3 pay ending with Apply by Dec 4.\"","checks":["r0","r1","maxSentences"]},{"title":"Adding facts","why":"The AI adds benefits or culture claims.","fix":"Say: \"Use only facts in the blurb.\"","checks":["r1"]},{"title":"Trusting the AI to count words","why":"AI is bad at counting. Ask for a total word limit and it often lands over it.","fix":"Cap each part instead, for example: \"each line under 15 words.\"","checks":["maxWords"]},{"title":"Markdown","why":"The AI bolds words or adds headings.","fix":"Say: \"Plain text, no bold, no headings.\"","checks":["plainText"]}],"promptHints":[{"label":"Three sentences","patterns":["three sentences","exactly three"]},{"label":"Sentence jobs","patterns":["sentence 1","duties","pay"]},{"label":"Ending","patterns":["apply by dec 4"]},{"label":"No hype","patterns":["hype","exciting","fast-paced"]},{"label":"Word cap","patterns":["under \\d+ words"]}],"hint":"Say what each sentence holds, how the last one ends, and which words to avoid.","mission":"Rewrite the job ad in three plain sentences.","musts":["Start with You will","Pay range, then Apply by","No hype words"],"rubricLabels":["Has exactly three sentences, and sentence 1 begins with \"You will\" (duties), sentence 2 gives location and schedule, sentence 3 gives the pay range","Uses only facts from the blurb (checks in patients, answers phones, keeps the schedule; 22 Birch Road, Dayton, Ohio, Monday to Friday 8 am to 5 pm on-site; $18 to $21 an hour) and the last sentence ends with \"Apply by Dec 4.\"","Has none of the hype words (exciting, dynamic, fast-paced, world-class, bustling) and no exclamation marks"]}