{"id":"sales-legal-redline-help-request-slack","audience":"sales","category":"sales-work","technique":"format","track":"sales","level":"beginner","title":"Ask Legal to review customer redlines with a clear request","free":false,"task":"Write a Slack message to the legal team in plain text with exactly 4 lines starting Ask:, Deal:, Redlines:, Need by:. Ask is one request to review the customer's changes. Redlines lists the clause numbers only (no opinions or interpretations). Need by gives the day and date. No emoji, no \"quick\", under 55 words.","materialLabel":"Contract status (attached to your prompt automatically)","material":"Rep: Hamid. Deal: Marlow Dental Group, $39,600 per year, 12 months. Close target Nov 30 2026.\n\nCustomer redlines received Thu Nov 5: they changed clauses 4.2 (payment terms), 7.1 (limitation of liability), 9.3 (data hosting) and 12.1 (termination). Clause 3 and others unchanged.\n\nHamid's opinions (do not include): '7.1 looks fine' and '12.1 is a dealbreaker'.\nTimeline: the customer wants to sign by Nov 20; legal's standard turnaround is 3 business days; Hamid asks for a response by Tue Nov 10.\nDocument link: [contract link] (placeholder).","rules":[{"type":"plainText"},{"type":"maxWords","max":55}],"mistakes":[{"title":"Including opinions","why":"The AI says 7.1 looks fine.","fix":"Add: \"Clause numbers only; no opinions.\"","checks":["r1","r2"]},{"title":"Vague deadline","why":"The AI writes 'soon'.","fix":"Add: \"Need by: day and date.\"","checks":["r2"]},{"title":"Chatty message","why":"The AI adds greetings and emoji.","fix":"Add: \"Four labeled lines, no emoji, no quick.\"","checks":["r0","plainText","maxWords"]}],"promptHints":[{"label":"Lists the four labels","patterns":["ask:","deal:","redlines:","need by"]},{"label":"Lists clause numbers","patterns":["clause numbers","4\\.2","7\\.1"]},{"label":"Bans opinions","patterns":["no opinions","interpret"]},{"label":"Requires a dated deadline","patterns":["tue nov 10","day and date"]},{"label":"Bans filler","patterns":["no emoji","quick"]}],"hint":"Give the four labels, restrict Redlines to clause numbers and ask for a dated deadline.","rubricLabels":["Has exactly four lines starting Ask:, Deal:, Redlines:, Need by: in that order","Ask requests a review of the customer's changes, Deal names Marlow Dental Group, and Redlines lists clauses 4.2, 7.1, 9.3 and 12.1 only","Need by is Tue Nov 10, and the message has no opinions about the clauses, no emoji and no \"quick\""]}