{"id":"study-sonnet-paraphrase-accuracy","audience":"high-school","category":"writing-feedback","technique":"verification","track":"study","title":"Check your line-by-line paraphrase of a sonnet","free":false,"task":"For English, you paraphrased four lines of Shakespeare's Sonnet 18 and want to know which you got right before your quiz. Get exactly 4 numbered lines labeled exactly Accurate or Inaccurate using Mr. Hale's glossary, with a reason under 12 words, plain text. Don't give corrected paraphrases.","materialLabel":"The lines, your paraphrases and the class glossary (attached to your prompt automatically)","material":"ENGLISH 10 - Mr. Hale - Sonnet 18 paraphrase check\n\nCLASS GLOSSARY:\n- \"temperate\" = mild, even-tempered, not extreme\n- \"darling buds of May\" = the lovely young flowers of spring\n- \"lease\" = a rental agreement for a set period of time\n- \"date\" = length of time, duration\n\nLINES AND MY PARAPHRASES:\n(1) \"Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?\"\n   Mine: Should I compare you to a summer day?\n(2) \"Thou art more lovely and more temperate:\"\n   Mine: You are more lovely and more hot-tempered.\n(3) \"Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,\"\n   Mine: Strong winds shake the lovely spring flowers.\n(4) \"And summer's lease hath all too short a date:\"\n   Mine: And summer's apartment has a short rental agreement.\n\nMr. Hale: \"A paraphrase keeps the MEANING. Literal word swaps that miss the figurative meaning are inaccurate.\"\n\nQuiz Wednesday. I'll fix the wrong ones myself.","rules":[{"type":"numberedItems","count":4},{"type":"maxWords","max":70},{"type":"plainText"}],"mistakes":[{"title":"Asking for a check","why":"The AI rewrites all four lines, which is the work you're practicing.","fix":"Say: \"Don't give corrected paraphrases. Just label them.\"","checks":["r2"]},{"title":"Not giving exact labels","why":"Without fixed labels, the AI says 'mostly right' about everything.","fix":"Say: \"Label each exactly Accurate or Inaccurate.\"","checks":["r0"]},{"title":"Not naming the standard","why":"The AI may accept a literal word swap, which your teacher marks wrong.","fix":"Add: \"Use Mr. Hale's glossary; literal swaps that miss the meaning are Inaccurate.\"","checks":["r1"]},{"title":"Not saying how many lines","why":"The AI picks its own number, and it usually picks more lines than you need.","fix":"Be exact: \"Exactly 4 numbered lines.\"","checks":["numberedItems"]},{"title":"Trusting the AI to count words","why":"AI is bad at counting. Ask for a total and it often lands 20% over.","fix":"Cap each reason: \"under 10 words.\"","checks":["maxWords"]},{"title":"Forgetting where it will be read","why":"AI formats for a screen, with bold and headings that show up as stray symbols in your notes.","fix":"Say: \"Plain text, no bold, no headings.\"","checks":["plainText"]}],"promptHints":[{"label":"Gives exact labels","patterns":["accurate.{0,15}inaccurate","label"]},{"label":"Uses the glossary","patterns":["glossary","hale"]},{"label":"Says not to fix","patterns":["(don't|do not|no).{0,20}(correct|fix|rewrite|new)"]},{"label":"Says how many lines","patterns":["\\b(4|four)\\b.{0,25}line"]},{"label":"Sets a length limit","patterns":["\\d+\\s*words","word (limit|count)","under \\d+"]}],"hint":"Give the AI two labels, your teacher's glossary as the standard, and tell it not to write the paraphrases for you.","rubricLabels":["Each line uses exactly one label, Accurate or Inaccurate, for paraphrases 1 to 4 in order","The labels are: (1) Accurate, (2) Inaccurate (temperate means mild, not hot-tempered), (3) Accurate, (4) Inaccurate (too literal; it means summer lasts too short a time)","Gives no corrected or new paraphrases"]}