{"id":"wri-job-linkedin-about-feedback","audience":"job-seekers","category":"writing-feedback","technique":"audience","title":"Get recruiter-eye feedback on your LinkedIn About section","free":false,"task":"You're switching from teaching to instructional design and want feedback on your LinkedIn About section from a recruiter's point of view. Ask for a first line starting 'First 2 lines:' that says whether the opening tells a recruiter what job you want, then exactly 3 numbered notes quoting phrases to change. Plain text, no rewritten About section. Write a prompt that gets that feedback.","materialLabel":"Your About section and target roles (attached to your prompt automatically)","material":"MY LINKEDIN ABOUT SECTION (draft)\nFor the past 9 years I have been a dedicated and passionate educator who loves seeing students grow. I believe every child can learn and I am a lifelong learner myself. Teaching has been my calling, and I have worn many hats, from coaching volleyball to running the school garden.\n\nIn my 7th grade science classroom, I designed 30+ units, built our school's first online course in Canvas during 2020, and trained 25 teachers on using it. I have recently completed a certificate in Instructional Design from Lakeshore University (2026).\n\nI am excited for my next chapter!\n\nTARGET ROLES\n- Instructional Designer or Learning Experience Designer at companies (corporate training).\n- Recruiters see only the first ~2 lines before \"see more\".\n\nNOTES\n- Strongest proof: built the Canvas course and trained 25 teachers.\n- Portfolio: alexmorgan-id.example","rules":[{"type":"numberedItems","count":3},{"type":"plainText"}],"mistakes":[{"title":"Asking \"is this good?\"","why":"The AI praises it and offers a full rewrite.","fix":"Show it: \"Line 1: First 2 lines: ... Then exactly 3 numbered notes.\"","checks":["numberedItems","r0"]},{"title":"Not saying who's reading","why":"The AI reviews it like a teacher's bio, missing that recruiters only see 2 lines.","fix":"Add: \"Review it as a corporate recruiter who sees only the first 2 lines.\"","checks":["r0"]},{"title":"Notes without quotes","why":"The AI says \"make it more results-focused\" without pointing at the words.","fix":"Add: \"Each note quotes the exact phrase to change.\"","checks":["r1"]},{"title":"Getting a rewrite","why":"AI hands back a new About section, so it isn't in your voice.","fix":"Add: \"No rewrite. Plain text.\"","checks":["r2","plainText"]}],"promptHints":[{"label":"Says who's reading","patterns":["recruiter","hiring manager","first (2|two) lines"]},{"label":"Asks about the opening","patterns":["first 2 lines","opening","first line"]},{"label":"Asks for quotes","patterns":["quote","exact (phrase|words)"]},{"label":"Bans a rewrite","patterns":["don'?t rewrite","no rewrit","not (a )?rewrite","only the"]},{"label":"Asks for plain text","patterns":["plain","no bold","no markdown","no formatting","no headings"]}],"hint":"Recruiters decide from two lines. Tell the AI who's reading, what to check first and to point at exact phrases.","rubricLabels":["The first line starts with 'First 2 lines:' and says the opening doesn't tell a recruiter she's looking for instructional design roles","There are exactly 3 numbered notes, each quoting an exact phrase from the draft (such as 'dedicated and passionate educator', 'worn many hats', 'I am excited for my next chapter!'), and at least one points to moving the Canvas course / 25 teachers proof or the certificate higher","No rewritten About section and nothing after the 3 notes"]}