{"id":"wri-sb-about-page-feedback","audience":"small-business","category":"writing-feedback","technique":"format","title":"Get three exact fixes for your About page, not a rewrite","free":false,"task":"You want feedback on your bakery's About page draft, not a rewrite. Ask for exactly 3 numbered fixes, each quoting the exact phrase to change and giving a replacement under 15 words, in plain text. One fix must correct the award claim using the award facts in your notes. No praise paragraph, no intro, and no rewritten version of the page. Write a prompt that gets that feedback.","materialLabel":"Your About page draft and award facts (attached to your prompt automatically)","material":"ABOUT PAGE DRAFT - Rise & Rye Bakery\n\nWelcome to Rise & Rye, where passion meets flour! We are a family-owned bakery that has been serving the community with love since forever. Every single item is made from scratch with the finest ingredients known to humankind.\n\nOur founder, Maria Kowalski, learned to bake from her grandmother in Krakow and opened Rise & Rye in 2016 on Parsons Avenue. Today our team of 9 bakes over 40 kinds of bread, pastries and cakes every morning, starting at 4 am.\n\nWe were voted the best bakery in Ohio! Our rye sourdough has a cult following, and people drive from all over to get it before it sells out (usually by 10 am on Saturdays).\n\nWe believe in community. We donate unsold bread to the Parsons Avenue Food Pantry every evening. Come visit us and taste the difference that love makes!\n\nAWARD FACTS (from the certificate on our wall)\n\"Best Bakery, Franklin County - 2024 Readers' Choice, Columbus Eats Magazine\"\n\nOTHER FACTS\n- Opened May 2016.\n- Hours: Tue-Sun, 7 am - 2 pm. Closed Mondays.","rules":[{"type":"numberedItems","count":3},{"type":"plainText"}],"mistakes":[{"title":"Asking for \"feedback\"","why":"The AI gives 8 to 12 suggestions under headings, then rewrites the whole page.","fix":"Set it: \"Exactly 3 numbered fixes.\"","checks":["numberedItems"]},{"title":"Vague advice","why":"The AI says \"tighten the intro\" without saying which words or what to use instead.","fix":"Show the shape: \"Each fix: 1. Change \\\"...\\\" to \\\"...\\\" (under 15 words).\"","checks":["r0"]},{"title":"Missing the risky claim","why":"The AI polishes the wording but leaves \"best bakery in Ohio\", which your certificate doesn't support.","fix":"Add: \"One fix must correct the award claim to match the certificate.\"","checks":["r1"]},{"title":"Getting a rewrite and a pep talk","why":"AI starts with \"Great draft!\" and ends with a full revised page you didn't ask for.","fix":"Add: \"Output only the 3 fixes. No praise, no rewritten page. Plain text.\"","checks":["r2","plainText"]}],"promptHints":[{"label":"Sets the number of fixes","patterns":["\\b(3|three)\\b.{0,15}(fixes|changes|suggestions|edits)","numbered"]},{"label":"Asks for exact quotes","patterns":["quote","exact (phrase|words)","change \\\""]},{"label":"Flags the award claim","patterns":["award","best bakery","franklin county","certificate"]},{"label":"Bans a rewrite","patterns":["don'?t rewrite","no rewrite","not a rewrite","only the"]},{"label":"Asks for plain text","patterns":["plain","no bold","no markdown","no formatting","no headings"]}],"hint":"Feedback is most useful when it's specific and short. Tell the AI how many fixes, the shape of each, the claim to check, and to skip the rewrite.","rubricLabels":["Each of the 3 fixes quotes an exact phrase from the draft in quotation marks and gives a replacement of under 15 words","One fix replaces 'voted the best bakery in Ohio' with the accurate claim (Best Bakery in Franklin County, 2024 Readers' Choice, Columbus Eats Magazine)","The reply is only the 3 numbered fixes: no intro, no praise paragraph, no closing notes, and no rewritten version of the full page"]}